I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Monday, 2 December 2019
Friday, 25 October 2019
Cliff
I was walking around a carnival with my family walking past the stands where you can play a game and win a prize. As we walked past a stand that had these stuffed rock toys I told my dad that I wanted to get it so he said OK but you have to play the game first. The game was called shoot me. What you had to do was try and hit a moving object with these fake guns that shoot unhurt able bullets and also the object was moving really fast. So I sat up on these chairs and started to play I was shooting and shooting and then bang I hit the target and got a stuffed rock toy. As the guy passed me the stuffed rock toy I said to dad that I was going to name him cliff.
Then my family started walking around again looking at things. When we were walking around my older sister saw this ride and asked me if I wanted to go on it and I said yes.
So we ran over to the ride and hopped on it but as I was about to hope on it the guy that was working there said I wasn’t aloud to take cliff on so I placed cliff next to the rubbish bin and hopped on the ride. A few minutes later, my sister and I hopped off the ride and walked back to our family without remembering to pick up cliff.
We keep walking around and I still don’t realise that cliff is gone. Until we passed by the stand were I got Cliff from and that’s when I realise that he has gone. I tell my family and we start looking. We went everywhere around the carnival but we still couldn’t find him until my sister tells me that she remembers me putting cliff down by a rubbish bin because we couldn’t take him on the ride. So we ran back to that same rubbish bin next to the ride that we went on and there he is sitting down on the ground right next to the rubbish bin. I picked him up and said I will never lose you again cliff.
Then my family started walking around again looking at things. When we were walking around my older sister saw this ride and asked me if I wanted to go on it and I said yes.
So we ran over to the ride and hopped on it but as I was about to hope on it the guy that was working there said I wasn’t aloud to take cliff on so I placed cliff next to the rubbish bin and hopped on the ride. A few minutes later, my sister and I hopped off the ride and walked back to our family without remembering to pick up cliff.
We keep walking around and I still don’t realise that cliff is gone. Until we passed by the stand were I got Cliff from and that’s when I realise that he has gone. I tell my family and we start looking. We went everywhere around the carnival but we still couldn’t find him until my sister tells me that she remembers me putting cliff down by a rubbish bin because we couldn’t take him on the ride. So we ran back to that same rubbish bin next to the ride that we went on and there he is sitting down on the ground right next to the rubbish bin. I picked him up and said I will never lose you again cliff.
Friday, 27 September 2019
Otaki gorge
On the 26th of September I went to Otaki gorge with half of the year 7/8's. It was really fun. Also the year 11's came as well. Everyone got into groups and we all got 2, 3 or 4 year 11's in our group and they would show us how to make shelter, rafts and even a fire that we roasted marshmallows on. At the end of we played capture the flag. It was year 7/8's against the parents, teachers and year 11's. The year 7/8's won twice and the year 11's, parents and teachers won twice as well.
Sunday, 15 September 2019
El Rancho trip

Friday, 6 September 2019
My essay
This is my essay. My class has been writing a essay about A long walk to water. We had to choose a character that we thought was interesting and then write about all there emotions they had in the story.
In the story 'A long walk to water' by Linda Sun Park, a character I found interesting was a boy named Salva. Salva showed he was Brave, sad and Quiet in a number of events.
In the story, I found that Salva was very brave. I thought he was brave because In one point of the story, his group that he was walking with left him alone in the middle of the night. Salva had to stay by himself for a long time and also he was in the middle of nowhere. Another reason that I found Salva brave is because he led a big group of young boys from Ethiopia to Kenya and safety. There were about 1500 boys that he helped make the journey and 1000 of them survived. I think he was incredibly brave because If I was in that situation, I wouldn't of have known what to do at all.
In some bits of the story I think Salva was Sad. I think he was sad because when the village got attacked he had to run and leave his family and home behind. Another reason why I think Salva was sad is because Salva's group got attacked by rebels and the rebels stole all of the groups stuff. Then they sadly killed uncle because he was the leader. One more reason is because when Salva was walking with the group half of the time that they were walking Salva didn't know anyone.
Salva was very quiet in the story, because he didn't complain at all and he always stayed at the back of the group and didn't talk. I think it was good that Salva was quiet because if he talked a lot the group probably thought he was really annoying and didn't want him to be walking with them. But when Salva found his uncle he came out of his shell and wasn't that quiet.
In summary, Salva was brave, sad and quiet. He showed this in a number of ways throughout the story and this made him a character that I thought was great.
In the story 'A long walk to water' by Linda Sun Park, a character I found interesting was a boy named Salva. Salva showed he was Brave, sad and Quiet in a number of events.
In the story, I found that Salva was very brave. I thought he was brave because In one point of the story, his group that he was walking with left him alone in the middle of the night. Salva had to stay by himself for a long time and also he was in the middle of nowhere. Another reason that I found Salva brave is because he led a big group of young boys from Ethiopia to Kenya and safety. There were about 1500 boys that he helped make the journey and 1000 of them survived. I think he was incredibly brave because If I was in that situation, I wouldn't of have known what to do at all.
In some bits of the story I think Salva was Sad. I think he was sad because when the village got attacked he had to run and leave his family and home behind. Another reason why I think Salva was sad is because Salva's group got attacked by rebels and the rebels stole all of the groups stuff. Then they sadly killed uncle because he was the leader. One more reason is because when Salva was walking with the group half of the time that they were walking Salva didn't know anyone.

In summary, Salva was brave, sad and quiet. He showed this in a number of ways throughout the story and this made him a character that I thought was great.
Friday, 30 August 2019
Valiant little Taylor.
I was walking through the forest coming back from a training session for my fighting that I do. Until I come along some trolls laying down in the forest. Those exact trolls are My friends called Leo and Jim. Leo and Jim are my best friends we do everything together, But the one thing that can annoy me is there stupid pranks. So I thought to myself that it is time to get them back. “ now it is going to be very hard because two on to one can be tough but it is time for payback”.
So I thought of a prank that would be very good. 5 minutes went by and I had come up with my prank. “By the way, don't judge this is the only thing I can think of.'' So the prank that I am going to do it through pebbles at them and see what they do.
While Leo and Jim were sleeping, I went to go and find some pebbles. Surprisingly, there was heaps. So I picked up a handful and walked back to Leo and Jim. When I got back, I hid behind a tree so they wouldn’t see me when I was throwing the pebbles. Next thing later there was pebbles flying through the air and crash landing onto Leo and Jim. Probably about 1000 pebbles later Jim and Leo jump up and start talking about what that was.
But then they started walking around trying to figure out what it was. I saw them coming my way so I ran back home so they would not find me. A few hours later they came around to play and all they were talking about was what happened today when they were sleeping and all I was doing was laughing.
So I thought of a prank that would be very good. 5 minutes went by and I had come up with my prank. “By the way, don't judge this is the only thing I can think of.'' So the prank that I am going to do it through pebbles at them and see what they do.
While Leo and Jim were sleeping, I went to go and find some pebbles. Surprisingly, there was heaps. So I picked up a handful and walked back to Leo and Jim. When I got back, I hid behind a tree so they wouldn’t see me when I was throwing the pebbles. Next thing later there was pebbles flying through the air and crash landing onto Leo and Jim. Probably about 1000 pebbles later Jim and Leo jump up and start talking about what that was.
But then they started walking around trying to figure out what it was. I saw them coming my way so I ran back home so they would not find me. A few hours later they came around to play and all they were talking about was what happened today when they were sleeping and all I was doing was laughing.
Friday, 16 August 2019
Why I think summer is the best season of the year.
I agree that Summer is the best season of the year because it is always sunny and hot. The sun always makes me happy and when it is hot, I go for a swim at the beach or have an Ice cream at the park.
Another reason why I like Summer is because the long school holidays are in summer so that means I don’t have to go to school, instead I get to be sunbathing on the beach.
Where I live in the Summer the whole community gets together at our local river and we have boat races every year. I always compete in them. There are lots of different kinds of races like kayak races, swimming races, double kayak races, standing up kayak races, Backwards kayak races and even a creative race. A creative race is when you get to make anything you want and you have to paddle init down the river. One time someone made a bed and it surprisingly floated but it didn’t win. Also the races are in different year groups.
The last reason is because in the summer all my family can come around and we can have a bbq. Also we light the outside fire so then me and my cousins can roast marshmallows and we can light some fireworks.
So that’s why I think Summer is the best season of the year.
Another reason why I like Summer is because the long school holidays are in summer so that means I don’t have to go to school, instead I get to be sunbathing on the beach.
Where I live in the Summer the whole community gets together at our local river and we have boat races every year. I always compete in them. There are lots of different kinds of races like kayak races, swimming races, double kayak races, standing up kayak races, Backwards kayak races and even a creative race. A creative race is when you get to make anything you want and you have to paddle init down the river. One time someone made a bed and it surprisingly floated but it didn’t win. Also the races are in different year groups.
The last reason is because in the summer all my family can come around and we can have a bbq. Also we light the outside fire so then me and my cousins can roast marshmallows and we can light some fireworks.
So that’s why I think Summer is the best season of the year.
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