- My new horse is as fast as my dad's motorbike.
- The Fireman's pole at the playground is as tall as The giraffe.
- The ladybug is as small as a piece of sand which is really small.
- My face is beautiful like Macy my friends face.
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Kia Ora Olivia, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your brilliant similes! The point of a simile is to create a visual of something with reference to an extreme of something else and you have done an exquisite job.
Wow you got a new horse! What’s its name? It sounds like your horse can run super fast, who do you think would win in a race: you and your horse or your dad and his motorbike?
When I was little, ladybugs were my favourite insect. I liked how they were as red as a ruby and flew as fast as a bird. Now my favourite insect is a caterpillar. I like how they form a cocoon and turn into a beautiful butterfly almost by magic.
Quick tip: perhaps you could include some visuals of the similes you have created to really enhance your post. These could add interest and appeal to your readers.
Happy blogging.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon