I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Great effort Olivia. I like that you have included a pool, although I am a little disappointed that there is no mini putt :-) Do you have a problem (an area one) that you can write for your park?
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Great effort Olivia. I like that you have included a pool, although I am a little disappointed that there is no mini putt :-) Do you have a problem (an area one) that you can write for your park?
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