I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
I love the pieces of art you have created. You have some beautiful colours in here - I especially like the middle one, it reminds me of the sea and all of the different greens and blues of the ocean. I wonder if you could add to your blog post by including the link to the site we used to make our art, so that others could give it a go if they wanted to.
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I love the pieces of art you have created. You have some beautiful colours in here - I especially like the middle one, it reminds me of the sea and all of the different greens and blues of the ocean. I wonder if you could add to your blog post by including the link to the site we used to make our art, so that others could give it a go if they wanted to.
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