I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Great work, Olivia. You have been completing some awesome writing during our Lockdown, and I have enjoyed seeing and hearing about some of the things you have been up to in your bubble. I really can't wait to try out your recipe! I love your bubble profiles...I wonder if William has seen his? 😂
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Great work, Olivia. You have been completing some awesome writing during our Lockdown, and I have enjoyed seeing and hearing about some of the things you have been up to in your bubble. I really can't wait to try out your recipe! I love your bubble profiles...I wonder if William has seen his? 😂
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